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jkdbjj

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Feb 11, 2008 10:14 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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OK I think I have the site ready now. The designer has taken it pretty far now. We are adding many pictures to the portfolio over ht next few days. However, the functionality should be in tact at this point.  If you find any errors please let me know. 
 
Thanks for reviewing the partially done site earlier.
 
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casavalridge

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Feb 11, 2008 11:05 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Very nice site.  Clean layout, quickly communicates what you can do, and easy navigation. 
stonesledge

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I think that your web site is a great example of a well thought out design. Great work, on the site and your services!! Way to go!
 
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jkdbjj

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Feb 12, 2008 7:01 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks for the feedback.  Oh and Trailmix, I bookmarked your site because cause it is such a cool concept.  I have two boys so I am always looking for new ideas!
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CraigL

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Feb 12, 2008 8:32 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Really nice! :-) One suggestion: In the "Portfolio," I`d like to be able to click any of the images to see it enlarged, then have a "next" and "previous" button just for that set of images. Each page could have a "return to portfolio," just to make it a nice browsing experience, seeing your entire portfolio. I`d like to stay in the enlarged versions after I`ve chosen to enter the portfolio.

All in all, though, very nicely done. I can see places where you might have links to more in-depth information, but those can probably be added as the site matures.
casavalridge

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Feb 22, 2008 10:54 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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jkdbjj
 
Thanks!  It`s going to get much better in the next month.  Were building a Geocaching with Kids seminar, getting ready to publish a free e-book about building educational expeditions for children, and developing a scavenger hunt in Yosemite.  In short, things are crazy.  I really appreciate the feedback!
 
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May 14, 2008 7:07 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I didn`t get a chance to look at all of it, but it looks good and was easy to see the variety of products you offer. I found this sentence under window graphics:

Car window graphics are ideal for security on vehicles. They can also be applied is can be applied to or large windows in an office or showroom. Contact us to discover the possibilities of our window graphics.

That second sentence doesn`t make sense. You might want to proofread (or have a few people proofread) it a little better. Also, why are car window graphics ideal for security on vehicles? You mean they are secure, as in won`t come off? When I hear vehicle and security in the same sentence, I think anti-theft. Sorry to get so nit-picky, but I used to be an editor.


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