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Hi all

thanks for your comments in advance. I soon to go live with my new site all critique welcomed

http://www.datingchair.com/datechr/

thanks



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http://www.webpreneuronline.com/
Your start-up guide to online business and income strategies!

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Our Goal Is Your Success!
Founder Girls with Goals

Hi I`m Very well thanks.  The site is for people who date/ would like to date or improve their relationships. I am interested in people who are in relationships good or bad to share their challenges and success male or female. the site is a social site, so not a dating hook up site. So if you are in a relationship/ married you can join and contribute to social conversations on dating and relationships. you have the opportunity to rate peoples advice and more.  All reviews are wlecomed please sign up and under a alias if you want know how the site looks inside.  thanks for help in advance


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http://www.webpreneuronline.com/
Your start-up guide to online business and income strategies!

Hi Kaas

I think you have too much going on the front page with all the graphics and all... Graphics are great to use, but the ones you have just doesn`t flow and compliment the site too well. If you insist on using graphics, then I`d encourage you to at least add men to the equation too, since it seems it`s a product for both sexes.

Also, where you have:

Facts you should know about dating:

Discover amazing new ways to find your partner successfully.

Learn the secrets of why some men and women are more successful in dating.

Those are not facts --- I was expecting to see some facts about dating after reading that sub-head.

Here is a link to a guy who is a master at this stuff (he`s more geared towards guys picking up girls though, but I can see the same marketing strategies being used here)

http://doubleyourdating.com

I know it`s quite simple, but here is a page that has a little more:
http://doubleyourdating.com/0/catalog/

He rakes in about a cool $20 million yearly.

Hope this helps
Cartess

Kaas,

You should put all of that stuff you just mentioned in the quote above onto the web site. Because right now, the copy on the site led me to believe it was a hook-up type of site.

thanks I will tweak the front page


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http://www.webpreneuronline.com/
Your start-up guide to online business and income strategies!

cheers made some tweaks to the site add a guy etc and focused the writting say it about dating and relationships not a hook up site


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http://www.webpreneuronline.com/
Your start-up guide to online business and income strategies!

When you have text underlined, like in the center of your page, viewers automatically believe they are links and may click them, with nothing happening. Maybe make these areas bold text or a different color instead of underlined.

The image of the man looks like its is "scrunched" from side to side.

"Do you make these dating mistakes:" ..... maybe end it with a " ? ", and eliminate them after each bullet point.

Make your title tag more descriptive/keyword focused, and expand your meta keywords beyond "dating chair" and its variations.

Check your grammar, and correct the letter spacing  in your subtitle.





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M Hall
Website Critique Community
International Society of Curmudgeons

I`m comparing the site to eHarmony, and there`s just too much "We`ll tell you later, sign up now" on this site. It`s all well and good to talk about the mysterious inner game, but so what? There also are a lot of dating sites where you can immediately see who`s on the site, what`s going on, how it works, and so forth. Then, if you want to actually do something, that`s when you sign up.

If you were selling a book, then okay, I can see keeping the "secret" a secret. But since you`re running a forum, I`d want to experience the forum a little first, before having to sign up for something.