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I haven`t secured the domain name, but would love to get feedback.

www.freewebs.com/spiritualjourney

I hope you will visit it often to see what is new.

I am presenting it to SUN members before anyone else.

Hi Rev,
I like the colors of the site. I can tell it was a free site design, but you can make it appear "deeper" by adding some content.
For instance, WHY would I want to work with YOU?
I am sure you are nice, but how about getting some of your past clients to write some nice paragraphs about their experiences with you, and how you helped them with their lives.
Lots of websites out there.
give me reasons to stay.
Best of luck,
Franpro

I have to agree, I see where you are going with it, however it needs some WOW!  I do not mean animated graphics etc...just something that makes me to keep coming back.

Cheers

Stuart

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Well, everything worked and I was interested to see the PayPal shopping cart. That worked too, and it`s the first I`ve seen it implemented. But as for content, it seems there`s going to have to be a lot more.

I`m not sure what you`re running here; is it a church, an online church, a study group, counselling, or what? That could be built up in the content, particularly under the philosophy/beliefs area. There could be a strong "About Us" tab/page, and it`d be nice to see a personal picture--a portrait, like a business portrait.

I think when you`re in the sociology field, people will feel better if they can see the face behind the "voice," but that`s only my opinion. I wasn`t thrilled with the italic typeface on the Retreats page. It didn`t do anything for the layout, and was a tad hard to read. Other than that, it`s working and looks nice.

I do have to say it was a bit "jarring" to see a Google ad blasting away in the title area of the main page, though. It`d be much nicer to have your own domain and not be pushed into using ads you don`t want.

I just thought it was a little empty. I am sure that will change as time passes.

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Vincent Wilcox (a.k.a. KRAKR)
Drummer
My band: Letters Make Words

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