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Craig,

Thanks for the words of advice...

Hang in there my friend.... the clock images are coming on the next "revision" of the main page graphics.... Remember...this was just a rough "advance" look of what I am doing...to get your comments, and a feel for the direction I am heading as I re-design this.....again thanks for your comments.

Yes this will have elements of being a "splash" page... but it will be a home page showing product...in fact there will be some images of happy customers holding their orders blended into this main image.

Should have something loaded later tonight or tomorrow. Right now I have to go finish a couple clock orders.

Anyone else with advice or comments? They are welcome! :)

Stephen
sbasly@sbcglobal.net

 

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Regards,
Stephen

Stephen M. Basly, Pres., Picture~My~Heart
sbasly@sbcglobal.net

More Than A Clock... It`s ART! ClockART by Picture-My-Heart (www.picturemyheart.com).

I create Original Art,and Custom Personalized Clocks & Framed Prints (from your photo`s or digital images, forming a composite design with text and background).
THE GIFT FOR GIVING! Very UNIQUE!!
www.picturemyheart.com

Okay ....

Not going to say anything... until you tell me what you think....Here is the latest revision to the 1st page and it`s image...

http://www.freewebs.com/picturemyheart2/INDEXTESTA.html

Thanks for your feedback.

Stephen
sbasly@sbcglobal.net

 

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Regards,
Stephen

Stephen M. Basly, Pres., Picture~My~Heart
sbasly@sbcglobal.net

More Than A Clock... It`s ART! ClockART by Picture-My-Heart (www.picturemyheart.com).

I create Original Art,and Custom Personalized Clocks & Framed Prints (from your photo`s or digital images, forming a composite design with text and background).
THE GIFT FOR GIVING! Very UNIQUE!!
www.picturemyheart.com

All in all I like the graphic, but I would suggest making some of the text stand out more; it blends with the background just a little too much.

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M Hall
Website Critique Community
International Society of Curmudgeons

Okay Ladies and Gentlemen....

I`ve been taking feedback and making a few changes and have come up with 4 variations of the "RAINBOW" graphic for my homepage image.

Now these are just quicky designs I did in a hurry, and I will clean it up when I get a winner! Pretty much the same with some text variations. The background is changed slightly between a couple, where I pulled out clocks and replaced with a lady crying with joy after receiving one of my shadowbox clocks that featured her family....

Anyway...you will see the differences ...text, composition, etc... If you would take a "perusal" of each and give me your opinions, I should be able to come up with a winner...or one that is nearly "there" and requires a slight adjustment...

So get out  your scorecards at have at it....

http://www.freewebs.com/picturemyheart2/INDEXTESTA.html
http://www.freewebs.com/picturemyheart2/INDEXTESTC.html
http://www.freewebs.com/picturemyheart2/INDEXTESTD.html
http://www.freewebs.com/picturemyheart2/INDEXTESTE.html
http://www.freewebs.com/picturemyheart2/INDEXTESTF.html

Thank you all for your feedback... it is very helpful. I appreciate it!

Stephen
sbasly@sbcglobal.net

 

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Regards,
Stephen

Stephen M. Basly, Pres., Picture~My~Heart
sbasly@sbcglobal.net

More Than A Clock... It`s ART! ClockART by Picture-My-Heart (www.picturemyheart.com).

I create Original Art,and Custom Personalized Clocks & Framed Prints (from your photo`s or digital images, forming a composite design with text and background).
THE GIFT FOR GIVING! Very UNIQUE!!
www.picturemyheart.com

I`m going with WebLine. For example, on "Christian and Religious clocks," and "Cars, Bikes, & Big Boy Toys," and the other items, I can hardly read them at all. I suppose they`ll eventually become links, and they should stand out more.

But the main graphic is terrific! It instantly tells me what you`re doing, what`s your product, and if that`s actually you in the picture, even better! Now just make the related content---links and menu items---easy to read, easy to see as links, and more of a "call to action."