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blavel

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Mar 17, 2008 6:29 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi writeforyou,

I really like the look of your site, and I think that you have a really effective sales message.

I felt as if I wanted to click on the featured services, even if they all just link to the one page...

The pictures in your team profile pages would look better if you styled them with float: right so that the text would wrap around them.

I think having the blogs will be a really good way of promoting your site. That has motivated me to do that myself as a way of promoting my own site.

On the subject of colour (as we Aussies spell it ) schemes, I found this tool really useful for finding colours that look good together on a web page.


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CraigL

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Mar 17, 2008 6:42 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hey John (Blavel), that`s a totally useful link! Thanks for posting...! :-)
susiefen

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Mar 17, 2008 6:51 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks for the link, Blavel!  I am currently redesigning my site, and I have been looking for something like this.

Cheers!

Sue



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vwebworld

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Mar 17, 2008 7:03 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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As others have said... the orange color doesn`t fit with the rest of the color scheme.
 
You use a few different fonts in the header and have, it appears, two tag lines.
"Unique Content is priceless..."  and "Experience something... Priceless"
 
You should not underline any text unless it is a link.
 
There is a little (tiny font) link under the "send email" button linking to another site.
The vipnew.gif on the "vip-benefits" page does not appear.
 
~Roland


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writeforyou

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Mar 17, 2008 7:18 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks Blavel.  I appreciate the help!  vwebworld - I know - LOL the site is still under construction.  We`re working on the banner and all that too.  Thank you guys for the comments!!
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