Hi Mike,
I looked at your website and have a few things that might help you out. It is clear that your website needs refinement and a few changes but overall it is a good start. I like the fact that it is very personal and that the navigation bar includes things like "Coach Mike Recommends".
While the website has an easy to remember URL, the focus of the home page is not clear. You must use the most visually appealing areas of the site to clearly state your message. If someone were to read the content they would clearly understand what you are offering, but people will decide to read content only after they are sure it will offer what they are looking for. I feel that the headlines and focal points in the first "impression" of the site are vague and can be improved.
For example....you repeat the name of the website and make that very prominent. I understand that it is catchy...but it does not help the user understand the true focus of the site. I see many sites make this same mistake. Also, the main tagline "Supporting clients achieve balance in their lives and improve their bottom lines" just does not sound right. Maybe you can change the first word to Helping clients achie.......
Try making it clear that you are a Quickbooks expert ( im jealous by the way), that should be clear without having to read any content or scrolling down the page. I would move the Quickbooks logo higher on the page. You also have several grammatical errors that can be easily fixed.
It`s a great start and I wish you the best of luck!
P.S. You should make it easier for us to review your site by adding a link to it in your post. You can do this by highlighting the website address and clicking on the little chain looking thing on the tool bar...I will do it for you to help the others give their feedback
GO GET IT!!!!!
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