Major improvement. Bravo. I am impressed with the difference.
I agree that you don`t need the V/MC logo - if you are selling on the web, then people naturally expect that you will take credit cards. I would move it, and the PayPal logo to your order page.
Check your spelling. On a random search, I found this: "Sterli9ng Silver with Swarovski Crystals and Rhinestone Spacers Stretchy"
Just an idea, but could you offer fashion tips on the product descriptions? Also, don`t miss the opportunity to upsell when you have matching or complimentary pieces.
On your Wholesale page - the grammar is awkward and it doesn`t tell what a wholesale customer is.
On the About page - STOP SELLING. Just tell the viewer who you are and what experience you have with making jewelry. Some photos of you at work might be nice. And get rid of the ALL CAPS. It is yelling and looks amateurish.
Just a suggestion....
Why do you need such complex shipping methods? 99% of your goods can ship by USPS Priority Mail for the same flat rate anywhere in the USA. Up to one pound is $4.60. I use this for my product (DVDs) and charge a flat $5 per order, no matter the size of the order. The 40-cents pays for the label (I use "Click-n-ship"). If I get an order that cost me a little more in shipping, then I am pleased to eat the difference because I`ve more than made the difference on the price of the order. I find the flat shipping rate to be very consumer friendly and so simple to calculate using the PayPal checkout.
MannMade Digital Video