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ECJ68

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Jul 05, 2007 1:44 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I am a jewelry designer for a home/online based Jewelry Store.  My website was built from the ground up by me.  I have tried to make nice clear pictures from my scanner and I feel the prices are in the right range.

What the problem is:  I have had 2 sales in 6 months.  Unacceptable to me.  I have tried flyers, email, promotions, free shipping, $400.00 a month adwords, nothing is working!

The only business I get is home shows and craft fairs.

I do want to add Video Classes.  But I just don`t know if that will help or not.  People would have to pay and then can  view the class.

I don`t know where the error is or if I am the error for not doing something right.

I feel that I do spend money to try to make a go of it and get nothing in return.

I would appreciate it if I could get a critic of my pics, prices, ideas, general website feedback and any possible solutions.

My site is: 

http://www.elegantcustomjewelers.com

Many Thanks

 



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Chrisi
Deisigner
http://www.elegantcustomjewelers.com
newward

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Jul 05, 2007 2:32 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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First thing I noticed is the duplicate category names on the left.

Can you be more specific?  Does Yahoo allow for "sub-categories"

I set up a jewelry site for a client - she divides her merchandise into

Classic

Pearl

Silver

Vintage

then has necklaces, bracelets, sets, rings, earrings under each of those.  

The more descriptive you can be with the stones you are using the better as well.  Let the user click on the title, then have a really fabulous description for them to read - you need to "entice" more.

How is traffic?  Are you getting visitors and they are just not buying?  Or are you not getting visitors at all?

 



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Web Site Design
Internet Marketing
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NewWard Development, LLC http://www.newward.com
"We Make Your Web Site Your Best Employee"
ECJ68

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Jul 05, 2007 2:38 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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< =text/>_popupControl(); There are days that I get under 10 visits and there are days when I get good hits, up to 90 or so a day. I have to say that the most common is around 15 hits a day.

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Chrisi
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http://www.elegantcustomjewelers.com
ECJ68

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Jul 05, 2007 2:40 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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< =text/>_popupControl(); I forgot to mention when I was paying almost $400.00 for Adwords, I had over 100 a day...but no bites

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Chrisi
Deisigner
http://www.elegantcustomjewelers.com
Videography

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Jul 05, 2007 2:41 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Way too many buttons on the left side, some irrelevant to jewelry.  It`s not a website to sell jewelry, it`s a challenging maze of too many selections.  Your customers aren`t going to stay on this page very long.

All caps is shouting.  It`s rude and very unprofessional in any marketing material and it is hard to read.

Get professional help.  I mean for the photos.  The images do your work no justice.  You could put some photos into the flow of your pitch on the home page and then just one button to go to a products page.

And turn off the cap lock - that alone probably discourages half the visitors to the site.  (It looks like spam).



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Steve Mann
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MannMade Digital Video
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newward

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Jul 05, 2007 2:46 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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OK - you definitally need to adjust the left menu -

There isn`t much appealing on the home page to really grab the visitor - and make them want to buy.... get the photos with something more appealing... my client uses knick knacks to drap the necklaces over... we did have some professional photo work done.

There`s a lot of room for improvement here - but all is not lost :)



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NewWard Development, LLC http://www.newward.com
"We Make Your Web Site Your Best Employee"
Videography

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Jul 05, 2007 2:47 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I had to add:

"IF YOU DON`T FIND WHAT YOU WANT, CALL US OR EMAIL US WITH WHAT YOU WANT AND WE CAN FIND IT, MAKE IT OR EVEN DESIGN IT!!"

You need someone to proofread and edit your writing.  This sentence is really much more complex than it needs to be.  First, don`t use negative language in a marketing piece.  Next, keep it simple and don`t restate the obvious.

Try this: "Custom Jewelry - We`ll find it, make it or design it.  Tell us what you need."

Also, customers don`t "want" to buy stuff, you have to respond to their needs.

Steve


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Steve Mann
Internet Videographer
MannMade Digital Video
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ECJ68

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Jul 05, 2007 2:48 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks Steve.  I appreciate any help and comments.  I will change that asap. 

Thanks again.

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Chrisi
Deisigner
http://www.elegantcustomjewelers.com
ECJ68

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Jul 05, 2007 3:48 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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< =text/>_popupControl(); Do you really feel that is enough?  Don`t you think people may look for bracelets, necklaces etc. before they look for pearl, vintage etc.??

I agree about the caps, I do agree there are too many buttons, but  I just don`t know if I can break down the buttons into Classic Pearl vintage and silver.

Any other ideas?

???



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Chrisi
Deisigner
http://www.elegantcustomjewelers.com
CraigL

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Jul 05, 2007 3:49 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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The whole site is too big, too slow, and too confused. :-) ("But other than that, Mrs. Lincoln, how did you enjoy the play?")

I`m not trying to blast the site, but if there`s a problem, it makes sense to look at it as analytically as we can, right?

I went to the site. Before even going there, my mind was "Oh jeez...another jewelry site!" That`s something to overcome---the differentiation problem many businesses face.

The actual site loads quite slowly. I have a DSL line, and it was click-pause, click-pause, and so forth. Annoying. It looks as if it`s a Yahoo! store? Those seem to be problematic on a regualar basis, but I`m not a Web developer.

From a logic and navigation viewpoint, it`s just way too much "extraneous" information. Consider a *definition.* When you define something, you acknoweldge and reference all sorts of related stuff. But what makes a real definition is that it *focuses* on a single, unique attribute---something that applies to nothing else, other than that thing.

Everything that isn`t part of the unique attribute is "non-essential."

So how do you separate out the *essential* from the non-essential? What`s important, and what`s not so important? What`s necessary to the site, and what can you get rid of?

That applies not only to the content, but also to the *process.* By that, I mean how many clicks does someone have to make to get to where they want to be? Why go from A to B to G to L to H to C? Why not just go from A to C, and be done with it?

I see that in your pictures.

From my perspective, if you`re going to sell jewelry, people want to *see* your jewelry. That`s the first step. If they like what they see, THEN they`ll maybe wander around and look at other pieces, then how to buy it. But FIRST, they want to see the jewelry.

You make it wonderfully difficult to actually see your pieces. :-) I had to click about 4-5 times just to see even one picture up close. By then, I`d forgotten where I started, why I wanted to see it, which category it was in, and pretty much everything else I`d had in my mind. That`s no good.

Here`s something you can try: Pick a couple of days and find a large floor in your home. Lay out your jewelry AND your Web site on that floor. You don`t have to put ALL you pieces on the floor, but choose 5 of every type.

Use 4x6 index cards for your buttons, navigation, and other links.

Then stand back and look at what you have. What`s the most important? What are your real categories. How *interesting* is your layout on that floor? What you`re doing is to recreate a brick-and-mortar store. How interesting would it be if you have such a store with actual glass display cases?

Have a friend pretend to be different customers. "Hello....I`m looking for something in purple." Or, "Hello...do you have anything in silver?"

Listen to (or record) the dialog. "What sort of silver?" Or, "Are you looking for a necklace or a ring?" And so forth.

Re-outline your entire site, and focus on how to answer regular customer questions. Make your pictures immediately accessible, so that every place you have a thumbnail, allow the click-link to take you directly to that item, larger, with a description and price.

I believe jewelry stores can benefit from a 3-stage photography process. First, a thumbnail. Second, an expanded area/window with the image 2x the thumbnail AND description and price. Third, a full-size standalone closeup of the item, in the 640x480px range (or larger).
CraigL2007-7-5 15:52:57
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