Hi Mark,
This is actually a really nice site! The only comments I have are just
tiny little nit-pick details. I like the colors, the site`s easy to
understand, I had no trouble navigating, and generally enjoyed the
whole experience.
First page bullets: It`s rare to use bullets ahead of entire questions.
They`re meant more as rapid-fire "talking points." So you might
consider that first, eye-catching paragraph differently:
New Supplement Offers a Quantum Leap in Natural Weight Loss!
- A real solution for stubborn fat clinging to your middle,
- An energy supplement to boost your athletic endurance,
- Natural supplement works with your body to achieve results
In your banner, you should make your logo (on the left) a link to your
home page. You also should make the graphic of 4 bottles a link to your
Buy it page.
Left-side navigation bar: I got a bit confused with the 2 green-text
"category" bars. To make that better stand out, perhaps you could
indent the actual link titles a quarter inch or so. For example, I
tried to click on "More information..." and got nowhere.
Otherwise, you could turn those category headings into links as well.
You`ll want to go through your page titles, setting those up so they
make sense in a sitemap sort of outline. For your home page, you should
have a descriptive title along the lines of "Flat Healthy Stomach
Weight Loss Supplement." Then the same concept with your other pages. (Helps
in SEO and search results.)
Then be sure to fill out your meta-tag "Description" area with 150
characters (not words) that describe each page. Not the product, but
the specific page. So for your home page you`d have something like:
Home of the new Flat Healthy Stomach weight-loss supplement that works with your body to achieve results.
That`s 105 characters, so you have room for 45 more. That description
is what will show on a search-engine result page, and the Page Title
will be the title of the results summary paragraph. So a "result" would
(should) look something like this:
Flat Healthy Stomach Weight Loss Supplement
Home of the new Flat Healthy Stomach weight-loss supplement that works with your body to achieve results.
http://www.flathealthystomach.com/index.php
People get a whole lot of information before they even click the link for your "title."
CraigL2008-12-4 22:14:33
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