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www.mymediadj.com

I am going to start marketing very soon and would like a critique of the content on my website.  I wrote it myself and helped design it with my partner.  I know the look needs improvement but right now I am focused on the content. Here are the questions that concern me most?

1. Are there too many words on the main page?  Is the viewer immediately turned off by that?
2.  Am I getting my point across about what the product does?
3.  I am going to add 3 feeds that the user can use for free as a trial product, where should they go?  Which page?  What position?
4.  Is the MP3 player too distracting?

In addition, if you think there is anything else i should know, please tell me.

Thanks for your time and effort.


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Carri Craver
CEO, My Media DJ
http://www.MyMediaDJ.com
(310) 929-7235

1 - yes get me right to the product or service please. I only want to see an overview of what this site has.

2 - a little confusing I might suggest doing some type of graphical interface like our vendor flow service. a simply step process to get the stations you like, etc.

3 - On the home page up front and easy to find. and then again on the product page.

4 - no to me, just make sure it doesnt play instantly the user should activate it.

It seems like there should be some type of playlist or something. I want to see all the channels and listen to them on your site. I only see 9 channels and no demo service. Where`s the list of content I can pick from?

One thing this seems to lack on the homepage is a strong call to action for the user to sign up. I would also suggest you offer a free 30 day trial get them hooked on a great service.

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He who gets greedy like a pig, gets slaughtered like a hog!

Looks interesting but like Todd said you should have a demo and a free trial, as it stands you expect folks to trust that what they will encounter is something they`ll like. It should be the other way around, allow them to test your service. If they like it, they know that after the free trial expires they have the option to keep it for a fee.

Thanks.  This is very helpful.  Does anybody have favorite websites that I should learn from?  Copying someone`s style and then adjusting it is so much easier, but I just haven`t found a website that I really love their presentation and it would be a good fit to mimic.

Also, the first thing I am going to do is add the free trial.

Thanks,




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Carri Craver
CEO, My Media DJ
http://www.MyMediaDJ.com
(310) 929-7235

Hi Carri,

Interesting concept!

I`d like to see your logo out from the traffic image.

It`s a simple site. Quick download to get the point of
the site.

The iPod did get in my way on the "Service" page. Maybe
it shouldn`t play automatically. Provide the visitor opportunity
to tune in.

I believe an overview of  your service should be coming from
the iPod. For those who didn`t read it by skimmed it can now
here. Use the media avenue to engage the sense - hearing.

Oh, include some testimonials. What are others saying. You
may wanna offer the service free for a small sample to get
testimonials in return.

Hope you found some value in what I`ve shared.

Continue to make this the best day ever!

Won`t Be Denied!
C.F. Jackson

Lighting 1,000 Dreams Worldwide!

The idea about explaining the product in the MP3 player is great!  I hadn`t thought of that.  Very helpful feedback.

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Carri Craver
CEO, My Media DJ
http://www.MyMediaDJ.com
(310) 929-7235