I made some of the recommended changes to my site please critique it again. All of you are so helpful.
Aaron Burnett Owner of We Work You Play
Errand Service Blog
i like it alot more! its to the point and leaves little to user to try and figure out. i would make a few small changes listed below:
1 - change your font on the tag line - "we work you play" - its doesn`t pop - its a great line and you need to make it visible -
2 - on the upper right you have your phone number and description : errand running service" while i like it there - i think you should either move it to the center / lower middle of the site and again make the description more visible, change the color/font.
3 - it seems to have a feminine flair to it, colors ect... i would change that to more neutrals
over all i like it and i think you have a great idea!
aaron, i am not a graphics person in the least, only an end user with a little experience in the internet world. that was my opinion and others may disagree. that being said, i would pose the question the group and go with the consensus. as a unbiased consumer i think you should make the colors a little more neutral. i always go to the top sites for direction, startupnation for instance, orange red blue green ect... you don`t want to go with the browns because it will kill the pop that you are trying to achieve - maybe even go with some crazy colors what ever just make it pop - you are on the right track, jeff