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Ayishah

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Nov 05, 2007 12:38 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Dianne,

Thank you sooo  much with your review. I am in the process of updating my site to address some of the same issues you mentioned. The layout will be very different and hopefully easy to navegate. Once it has been updated, I will post it again for review.

Thanks again!!!!

GD8N

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Nov 11, 2007 6:38 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi there. I was looking at your site.  The Marquee thing really doesn`t add to it.  Also, I am a bit confused:

`We are a mobile language learning program providing foreign language instruction to preschools, after school and summer camp programs in the south Florida area.

Our mission is to enrich children, ages 1 to 8, with a foreign language in a natural way, through listening, repeating, playing and speaking in a non-intimidating and fun environment.`

I feel mislead by the first part. 
I am Bilingual as well, but I speak German and English.  Do you offer services for my language too?  You seem to only teach Spanish as the second language.  Bilingual means fluency in two languages, not only Spanish and English.   I would suggest replacing foreign with Spanish.

Good luck!

bilston

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Dec 23, 2007 4:13 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I am new to the Web building  game but yours looks ok to me But i,m no pro
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