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I see that people have been checking out the post (100+ views) but there aren`t any comments. Please comment even if it is just 1-2 sentences. I am considering changing the site and need feedback first.

Thanks,

Ayishah

www.bilingualbeginningselc.com

Thanks for the suggestions. I do not mind criticism, which is why I listed another post. I am in the process of updating my site and have tons of changes! I will offer to more markets (native Spanish-speaking, other languages and even adults) I live in Boca myself and will be needing some accounting assistance soon. I`ll keep your name in my email.

Thanks again!

Thanks for your input! I have to make the corrections on the site. I will be adding more languages to the program too! I am glad you know the importance of learning another language. I am posting some quotes from the us dept of education that confirms where the us is heading, particularly when it comes to language learning. I will definitely sell the concept more!

Thanks sooo much... Very informative!

Not quite sure how to do that, but I`ll look into that. Great idea!

Hi, as a mother of 3 small children I like the concept.

WEBSITE suggestions-

1.  I use my thinkpad laptop only.  When 1st loading your site I have to scroll down to read anything that tells me what I need to know. There is some empty space at the top can everything be moved up?

2.  Maybe you could add at the top next to the hand a more specific sentence about what you do, are, etc. something quick and easy to read that tells me whether you come to my area, or I can purchase training materials etc.  Can take the sentence below and move it above the childrens photo?  Change the font to be more eye catching.   It is your elevator pitch right and tells exactly what your business does. 

"We are a mobile language learning program providing foreign language instruction to preschools, after school and summer camp programs in the south Florida area"

3.  Have you identitied your competition?    If you are trying to target the mommies and/or private daycares with money it `seems` like you need a mascot.   I know that sounds silly, and you may have already discarded the idea..but others in this same business all have some sort of visual mascot..puppet.  

4.  The sentence below is missing something. Should you add `beginning foreign language studies` or `beginning a foreign language?"She is committed to the importance of beginning foreign language at a young age and is raising three bilingual children."

5.  Most important,  market more to that fact that  you are a MOTHER of 3!  That attracted me the most and made me feel more comfortable.  That should be somewhere on the home page, and talked about more on the about us page in the 1st sentence.  

6.   I do not see prices.  Even having a range would be helpful.  My best friend just started a private kindergarten and when I was searching for outside consultants for her art class etc. If  I did not see prices on the companies website I would move on.   I do that when shopping for personal items also. 

7.  Post a picture of yourself  and your children.  Especially if you are the only teacher/instructor.  This will let me know I can trust you with my children/class.   Hope this helps.  Good luck! 

Dianne