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robertj

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Jul 15, 2007 12:00 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Michael,

I`ve read your description and I think your story would be strengthened if you:

  1. Describe your business model in more detail.
  2. Discuss the competition (both direct and indirect)
  3. Include "research" that supports the need/want

Also, there is quite a difference between partners and investors. If I was looking for a partner, I`d start by "making a list" of what I want,  what I expect and what I`m willing to offer to the "right" partner.

 

 



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industryici

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Jan 08, 2009 3:16 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Good Morning Mr. Robert J
 
I am interested on helping investers, actually I work for International Co.for Industry & trading LTD In the king dome of Saudi Arabia.
 
lots of investers want to invest in Saudi Arabia because of the stability of the country, the business Opportunities,the mass number of company that are available...
So I say it`s much profitable if you invest in Saudi Arabia...
 
                         To any investers
 
This is your chance, then opportunistic opening activity of yourcompany or factory or your business, where economic power and purchasing large, and political and economical stability and government support via governmentalsoft loans and facilities for customs exemptions, and provide the industrial cities and industrial installations huge global level, by opening the prospects of an evolutionary proposed project,in addition To the broad market outlets are the products of Saudi borders. We`re on your behalf to demand and the completion of licensing and issuing visas Your arrival you and your family and facilitate procedures for the issuance of commercial register, 
Installations and follow-up of legislators together.
For more information, please contact the figure /
00966566388833 – 00966506388833
        E mail : ici.industry@gmail.com
 
 
 
 
 
 
industryici1/8/2009 3:22 AM
robertj

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Jan 08, 2009 10:52 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Industryici,
 
Since you posted this to the forum where we provide feedback on elevator pitches - may I offer the following comments:
 
1. It`s not clear to me whether the services are offered by your employer or you personally.
2. I`d strengthen your "problem-solution" statement.
3..You might want to check the phone number
4.  If you are targeting investors in the US -I`d suggest engaging an "editor" to help with the "flow" of the message.


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industryici

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Jan 10, 2009 2:36 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thank you for your compliment

 

It is clear that the company of the international Co. for industry and trading provides the offer, Which is the employer.

 

The phone numbers that are available in the post are ok and works currently

The target is giving a chance to invest in Saudi Arabia, providing our service,

Any investors desire to invest, not only from US but also from all around the world

We provide our services…
 

Thank you again & have a nice Day

edwarddevis

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Feb 27, 2012 11:43 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks for the offer, it looks nice for investors who want to earn from trade market, i will look into the offer.

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