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Hello-

I am looking for some constructive feedback for my website. It has been throuh numerous revisions as I have had some comments and suggestions to make changes.

www.frtradeshow.com

I run a Tradeshow Coordination company. My primary job is to handle all the paperwork aspects of the tradeshow for my clients. I ensure that deadlines are met and all the paperwork is complete. I also ship and store booth property.

I want to make sure that when visitors visit my site, they understand clearly what I do.

Any and all suggestions woud be appreciated.

Best!

Christina

Hi Christina,

A couple of suggestions:

• Homepage: smaller font for text bodies, leaving titles as they currently are.
• Homepage: instead of the Tradeshow picture you have up, find a picture that conveys a message appealing to the business owner (the joy of the biz owner not having to deal with paperwork, the rush of clients at the booth, etc)
• Services page: I would change the color of the titles to the same blue as the header.

Hello there I really dont know what to say but your site looks professionallly design...

For me it looks cool..

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Thanks Restrol!!! I appreciate you checking it out.

Best,

Christina

Diego-

Thank you so much for your opinions. I had reservations about making the font so big. I struggled with this for a long time. I thought that if it was smaller it might be hard to read. I am working on a large computer screen so maybe this is why. I will look at changing the font size and see how it works.

As for the picture on the front page. I like your ideas! Especially people rushing to a booth! Great! As for the blue color on the services page, I am looking to see how a change might look.

Thanks again for your opinions, nothing better than having someone critique you and give positive feedback! Much appreciated.

BTW: I took a look at your sight and I am so excited! Do you sell by the piece or only bulk orders? If by the piece, I found my dad a Christmas gift. We are a huge soccer family. My father is from Argentina and played a lot of soccer throughout his life and even couched us as kids. We follow the World Cup religiously! I will also send him the link, he has many friends who are fans too!

Looks like you are in the Sacramento area. Do you have a storefront?

Best,

Christina

I like the image on the home page.  Two things stand out to me.  First,  "small to large businesses" is kind o an oxymoron, isn't it?  How about "businesses of any size"?

Next, in 'services', I see an awful lot of "We Can".  That's passive, and it doesn't say what's in it for me.  Use the active voice and tell the viewer the benefits, not what you can do.

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Steve Mann
Internet Videographer
MannMade Digital Video
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Thanks Steve-

I appreciate you taking a look. i made some of the changes you suggested.

I enjoy hearing others opinions. Nothing like having a complete stranger tell you what they think!

Thanks again.

Best,

Christina