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Hmm, I`ll have to agree with Nikole.  The punctuation and wording could be spruced up a bit.  (There are many unneeded commas.)  Overall I think the article is good and you are saying the right things.  I just think it needs one more strong edit.

ugh...my heart is broken!  It`s like exposing your soul and having people critique it!  Just kidding...sort of!

I agree with you though...I went back and read it again after reading the posts.

My main concern was that someone didn`t see the page, think `I am not gonna sit here and read all that,` and then click off of it.

Samantha, I am an artist in a creative field myself.

Don`t be heartbroken.  "Exposing your soul" is part of what makes you a better writer.  I don`t think anyone is saying you did poor work.  We know you`re a professional writer so it`s more like we`re saying you can do better work!  :)

One great thing about the SuN community is that people are not shy about helpful nudges.  Best interest is always in mind.

Sam, it`s a great article.  If we agree some minor changes should be made, we will. Thanks for your thoughts on it Nikole.

So, Steve, should we "roll out" the new logo? :)

 

Oh, I really appreciate comments that are made in an effort to help me out.  I enjoy getting advice and learning new things.  Thanks a lot.