Here`s a fresh look since I didn`t see your original site.
Your best work is hidden inside the site - it should be on the front page.
I don`t understand the "one,two,three" buttons on the sample pages. I only accidentally found that they were links to more samples. Why don`t you just put them on the same page? Why should the user have to click again to see more of the same samples?
The text on the home page is all about you. This belongs in the About Us page. And there isn`t one. I want to know what`s in it for me!
Your explanations of the samples are extremely repetitious. In the Packaging examples, your text is identical, boring and doesn`t tell me anything. I want to know what you were thinking behind your design development. What was the clients` old design. How is your design better? In other words, if I am hiring you to do my logo and branding, I want to know how you think - how you look at the problem.
The text on the home page should be targeting an action by the shopper. Why are you better or different from the competition? What is the call to action? Nowhere do you say "Call Me". You just assume that the shopper will be amazed with your work and naturally seek you out. Sorry, it usually doesn`t work that way on the web.
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