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sipmarketing

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Feb 20, 2009 9:13 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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What do you guys think of this landing page we put together. Just something simple for our new clients.

Feedback is greatly appreciated.

Here is the link: http://sipmarketinggroup.com/250freebie.html

Thanks!



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SIP Marketing Group
Direct: 323-774-1394
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SIP Marketing
Winnipeg Web Design
burchcovers

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Feb 20, 2009 9:54 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Sipmarketing,

I don`t like the stripes.  It makes it hard to read.  I think a more solid back ground would work  better.
sipmarketing

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Feb 20, 2009 11:12 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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thank you


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SIP Marketing Group
Direct: 323-774-1394
sales@sipmarketinggroup.com

SIP Marketing
Winnipeg Web Design
Imortal

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Feb 21, 2009 12:15 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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well one thing that bothers me is this seams to be a web design, seo and such company but, when I run it through a validator it shows 21 errors in your code.
burchcovers

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Feb 21, 2009 12:30 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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When I look at your landing page the first thing that comes to my mind before I read anything is a cheap get rich quick page with the money and just the general look.
 
When I go to your main site it looks professionally done. The two don`t look like they are from the same company.
 
My oppinion is that your landing page should kind of mirror your main website.
CraigL

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Feb 21, 2009 7:03 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I usually see pages like this and click away as a waste of time. I also don`t much care for the stripes...they make it look like something broke on my LCD panel.
sipmarketing

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Feb 22, 2009 2:56 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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This was a good testing grounds. Thank you all very much for your feedback. I do own a web development and consulting company and have also dabbled a bit into direct/information marketing. That landing page and the form (aweber) are typically used a lot in that industry and this is probably why you guys get that feel. Haha it`s making me chuckle actually.

This was something very simple we just came up with as a means of throwing out the voucher for the promo we thought we might push. Just wanted to get some feedback.

Thanks everyone for the feedback!

Lee




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SIP Marketing Group
Direct: 323-774-1394
sales@sipmarketinggroup.com

SIP Marketing
Winnipeg Web Design
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