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"What can you recommend to make it more interesting and more enjoyable for the user?"

First, don`t advertise here.  Let the reviewers determine your message from the website.

Second, the URL?




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Steve Mann
Internet Videographer
MannMade Digital Video
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Navigation is quite ease, but there`s a couple of quibbles.

First, your text is very wordy.  Try to cut it in half - at least on the home page.  The About Us page i also too wordy, and pretty much a longer version of the home page editorial.

Next: "events (at) LHEntertainment (dot) net"
There are other ways to hide your email addresses from spammers.  This looks downright paranoid.  I have not tried to hide my email addresses in my sites, and either Thunderbird is doing a very good job of catching spam or your email address in the website just isn`t the spam source that is imagined. I get more spam from the email address that I use on my Yahoo groups.

I won`t get into your titles.  They are appropriate for the page, but the "Cities" title is stuffed with keywords.  I don`t know how much of the title the search engines scan, but could you spread them out to the other pages? 

Others on this group may have a better answer about the keyword stuffing in the page titles.

Last, the type is a bit small.  If your intended audience is under 30, then you`re probably OK, but the over 40 crowd will have some difficulty reading it.



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Steve Mann
Internet Videographer
MannMade Digital Video
My Email