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KDandrea

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Jul 17, 2009 3:38 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Hi,

I recently launched my website and was wondering what folks thought. Please check it out and let me know. www.kelliedandrea.com

windows

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Jul 23, 2009 10:34 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Sorry if this sounds picky, but it is on the first page, I noticed that there is a couple of mistakes for day 4 and day 5, namely Day 4, plural for "evangelist" is evangelists and Day 5 "taken" should be taking, aside from that plenty of colour and grabs attention. On entering the site using the "enter site" button, again plenty of colour and text to describe the products and what your business is about.

egumball

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Jul 24, 2009 11:12 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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The "meta title tag" is a bit diluted... try compacting it down to the exact words you want your site to be found under in the search engines... remember, search engines are nothing more than a computerized library... make your site title bars relevant to the page content and while keeping your site user friendly and organized.... like a roladex....

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eGumBall, Inc.
8687 Research Drive, Suite 200
Irvine, CA 92618
"Local Internet Marketing"

Call 1.800.890.8940

http://www.egumball.com

KDandrea

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Jul 25, 2009 2:38 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Thank you so much for all of the help. I really appreciate your comments.

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