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DMorris

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Feb 05, 2008 12:38 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Hello All,

I`ve made some changes to my site and would love to hear any and all feedback. You guys are awesome!!

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Denise
Verbatim Virtual Office Support
http://verbatimsupport.com

CraigL

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Feb 05, 2008 9:17 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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This is really starting to take shape :-)

Here`s the next two things I`d put into place:

Your "Rates" page doesn`t show money right away, it shows what you require or don`t require. Solution: Add a "Terms & Conditions" page, and make the "Rates" page that specifically shows pricing structures.
Use large headlines and subheadings to "walk" the reader through the main outline points of what each page is intended to accomplish.

Headings (H1, H2, etc) tags not only make it easier for a reader to quickly get a summary of a page, they`re also picked up nicely by search engines during indexing.

All in all, the site is really coming along nicely! :-)

desertdyno

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Feb 06, 2008 11:59 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Hi Denise -

I don`t know what it looked like before, but I really like the simplicity of the site and the colors. It`s easy to read and navigate.

I did see your rate right at the top of the Rate Page, but I do agree with Craig on breaking out the rates and terms as well as the larger headlines.

Great work and I wish you well with your business!

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