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Hello everyone,

Please take a look again, I have made some changes since the last time I posted here. I want to thank you all for the informative critiques. http://www.coolerwagon.com

 

Just a couple of little things that I saw...

1) You don't need the word answer on the FAQ page...it's obvious from the change in font color which is which.

2) The menu bar across the very top of the page is a little small for my eyes (though it is readable).

3) I really like the history and conversational tone of the writing -- sounds like you are talking directly to the customer.

Best regards,

Molly Donaldson

 

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Start Here. Go Far. LaunchX

It's a little better than your first web page.  I would strongly recommend that you drop the opening music.  The moving cart is OK, but the Jamaican music has to go.  What if someone were looking at the site after mom and the kids were asleep?  What if the viewer was in an office when all of a sudden steel-drums!

Also, the truck-sign in the specs page looks amateurish.  It was cute in the early '80s, but it doesn;t look like a professional page.

It looks like you also want to sell Tupperware from this site, but I recommend that you create a separate site for the Tupperware sales, and provide links to each other.

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Steve Mann
Internet Videographer
MannMade Digital Video
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Molly & Steve,

Both of your comments is exactly what I'm looking for! Its funny, when you see & work with your own website everyday sometimes things go unnoticed and its great to hear from an outside perspective.

Thanks again & Keep them coming!