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Jul 04, 2007 1:46 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Greetings All,

Please view my website at www.inspirestudents.org and let me know how the new changes are.  We are selling inspirational postcards for anyone who is in need of inspiration

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Jul 04, 2007 5:54 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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This is a considerable improvement, but that background is still very distracting.  Make it smaller and screen it to 40% opacity.  Reading the text under it is difficult.

This sentence is awkward: "Postcards are just $.97 per postcard(shipping and handling included)".  How about: "Cards are 97-cents each, postage included".

I can`t read the tiny type on the pop-up (mouseover) images.  Is that intentional?

Also, again, why would you run out of stock?  The customer doesn`t care about your internal processes, he just expects the card to be in the mail shortly after you receive the order.  THAT is the service level expected - not "five days if they are in stock". 




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Jul 05, 2007 1:02 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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The big black graphic crosses under the text, making a lot of what`s on the home page unreadable.

When you say, "Please scroll down to learn more about our postcards," my immediate reaction is to not. Why should I? Why isn`t the site designed with a button or link that simply tells me (takes me to the place) more?

Same problem on other pages, with the black of the graduation robes wiping out the text.

Another issue is that a student isn`t usually a graduate. So why a big graphic of graduation ceremonies?
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