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Hello all...

Just finished a make-over of my website, and I`m looking for some feedback.

Be as honest as you`d like, just keep in mind I`m still a rookie at this.

Fire away...

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~Dave~
Industrial Clean Air

I guess an address would be handy as well... sorry, not feeling well today.

http://www.industrial-clean-air.com

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~Dave~
Industrial Clean Air

Visually, its clean and easy to read. Maybe break up all the blue link fonts with something different, though; its almost too much. I think some of your main page content ( text ) should be moved to the top of the page, above the images; give the viewers a little more info to start off with.

You seem to have two different menus on the left side, depending on what you have clicked on. Little confusing at first, since I`m not sure why it changes.

Personally I don`t care for the blue borders around the images on the main page, or the table frame, but just my opinion. Maybe add a short descriptive line below each image, and put titles in the image links.

In your code, you have a lot of empty lines and unneeded meta tags. Your css could be moved to another file. Overall, shouldn`t take a whole lot to clean it up.

You seem to have a lot of content, which is good. Overall, I would say not bad for the redesign, just a little tweaking here and there.



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M Hall
Website Critique Community
International Society of Curmudgeons

Holy Cow, this is MUCH better than the original...if it`s the same one I`m thinking of....! I`d like to see something about OSHA regs, because that`s where factory owners are going to get a real ROI. In other words, if OSHA shuts down the plant for bad air, how much will it cost them in comparison to cleaning up the air generally? Not to mention the excellent point about attracting employees.

Good Stuff, Maynard! :-)