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happy2beme

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Jul 28, 2007 8:26 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I`ve received such valuable information from you all in the past! We`re doing some home page revisions on the site and would be curious if any of you have any ideas on a headline for The Appreciation Station. I need something that will make people say, I need that! I`m too close to the product I think and would truly APPRECIATE any thoughts you all might have. Please check out the site at www.theappreciationstation.com and I`m open to any and all ideas.

Diana



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Are you a parent or have friends that are parents? Tell them about The Appreciation Station... the most innovative system to help parents be the best they can be through positive discipline. When you notice what`s right as opposed to what`s wrong, you begin to see dramatic results in your household.
jwatkins

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Jul 28, 2007 5:37 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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"Parenting just got easier"

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happy2beme

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Jul 28, 2007 5:48 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks, I like it!

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Are you a parent or have friends that are parents? Tell them about The Appreciation Station... the most innovative system to help parents be the best they can be through positive discipline. When you notice what`s right as opposed to what`s wrong, you begin to see dramatic results in your household.
jwatkins

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Jul 28, 2007 5:55 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I have three children and that would grab my attention. Either that or "Send me your children and I`ll send you one million dollars!"



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happy2beme

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Jul 28, 2007 6:06 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I have 4 kids, 5-15 and trust me when I say a little positive motivation goes a long way! Some parents said that just seeing the treasure chest, is worth it`s weight in gold, because the kids are reminded of the "goods" everytime they see it!



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Are you a parent or have friends that are parents? Tell them about The Appreciation Station... the most innovative system to help parents be the best they can be through positive discipline. When you notice what`s right as opposed to what`s wrong, you begin to see dramatic results in your household.
CraigL

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Aug 03, 2007 3:56 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I`ve been pondering this for awhile. Re-reading your signature line, I`m seeing there`s a way we could explore this tagline issue. Consider that at the moment, the `perspective` of the site is "from" parent, "to" child. In other words, the value being proposed is to the parent.

But isn`t the real value here the child, and the child`s developing socialization? The implication of the product is that "in today`s world, children often get ignored, lost, and taken for granted." If you think about it, the message---subliminal message---could easily come across as generally negative.

I believe that you`re seeing this intuitively, and that`s what we`re looking to accomplish---to develop a strong, positive message.......of some kind. Would you agree?

So what are we trying to say? :-) One of my favorite questions....
  • Your child needs something
  • They aren`t acting or behaving in some way
  • They need validation, approval, interest, enjoyment, appreciation
  • To repair or forestall future issues, give them tangible rewards for good behaviors.
In this organization we`re saying, "There`s a problem, kids are in trouble, life is tough, I need help." And that`s the problem with an approach along the lines of "parenting got easier." Parenting is tough. Although WE as adults, might have fun with "take my children....please," the danger is that the joke becomes so well known that kids pick up on it.

I think we need to reverse the message and focus on:
  • Kids love attention
  • They want to do the right thing
  • They don`t know the right thing
  • They don`t have a conceptual, abstract mind
  • Rewards are a huge amount of fun
  • Kids love to spend time with mom and dad.
happy2beme

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Aug 03, 2007 5:26 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Okay Craig, Will you just marry me???? (LOL)Nikole has done a face lift on the home page, changing my messaging to carry more of my message to parents, than just a prize box. I`d love your comments, it`s just a rough draft, beta site, but could I send it to you for your feedback?

Thanks Craig, I always admire your thoughts.



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Are you a parent or have friends that are parents? Tell them about The Appreciation Station... the most innovative system to help parents be the best they can be through positive discipline. When you notice what`s right as opposed to what`s wrong, you begin to see dramatic results in your household.
olliepure

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Aug 03, 2007 7:33 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi,

Olliepure here.  As i look over the site two words come to mind.  "Parenting Treasures"!  This comes to mind because I don`t have a quiver of treasure yet.  

-Adrian


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Adrian D Griffin
Newhomefitness
Corp: South Bend, Indiana
574-855-4437
1-800-761-0321
www.newhomefitness.com
sales@newhomefitness.com
happy2beme

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Aug 03, 2007 10:40 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks Adrian,

The treasure chest for me symbols what I treasure most~ my family!

Diana



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Are you a parent or have friends that are parents? Tell them about The Appreciation Station... the most innovative system to help parents be the best they can be through positive discipline. When you notice what`s right as opposed to what`s wrong, you begin to see dramatic results in your household.
CraigL

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Aug 03, 2007 11:50 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I think posting a beta site is an excellent way to use the "web critique" concept we have going on SuN. Much better to make changes in beta, than when it`s all done, right?
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