I agree, get rid of the Amazon section .... you want people on your site interested in your
products, not someone elses` .... and I don`t see a point in either of the search bars, as you don`t have much at this point to search for .... move the "Tell a Friend" link, it doesn`t add to the content by being within
Decide on what your primary message is .... to sell me a wagon, or find investors for your company ....
If you want to sell me a wagon, the first thing you want to do on your main page is show me
, your website visitor, different ways in which this would be beneficial to me
.... you`re showing up front a picture of 2 people using the wagon, which is good for me
to get an idea .... the other pictures don`t do anything to tell me
how it helps me
or solves my
problem .... get the idea? Use images and text to show me
, a potential buyer, why this is good for me, and make me want to get one .... don`t state "We think this will be a great product someday
", as that isn`t making me, a potential customer, have any faith in it right now.
If you want investors, look at it from an investors point of view .... ask yourself questions .... "Why do the developers think this will be a successful product?" .... "Why would the general public buy this?" .... "Will you, the developer, expect sales to roll in on their own, or will you actively promote this product?" .... "Am I investing in a reliable, viable, and profit generating product and company?" .... "If it isn`t great today, why not, and when will it be?" .... know how to answer all of these beforehand.
If you are trying to do both, I would suggest a public site, and an investors area, and share different information with each group.
You have a member log in ..... I don`t see any information on membership, a members area, or what a membership offers.
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