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THE DELICATESSAN WILL FEATURE MY SIGNATURE SPECIAL PHILLY STEAK AND CHEESE SUBMARINE, ALONG WITH MY 12 OTHER SUBMARINE SANDWICHES, YELLOW PERCH FISH, JUMBO HOT WINGS, JUMBO SHRIMP AND MY FLAVORFUL CHICKEN TENDERS.

MY TARGET MARKET IS COLLEGE STUDENT, PARENTS AND THERE CHILDREN, SENIOR CITIZENS AND ANYONE ELSE WHO WANT TO KICK OFF THE SHOES AND SIT  BACK AND ENJOY SOME SERIOUSLY AWESOME  QUALITY AND TASTY FOOD.  THIS IS A NEW AND INNOVATIVE DELICATESSAN STYLE.  I HAVE INVESTED SOME WORKING CAPITAL AND WILL INVEST MORE WHEN I FIND THE RIGHT INVESTOR AND PRESENT MY PRESENTATION FOR THE DELICATESSAN AND LOCATIONS

YOU CAN EMAIL ME HERE OR AT jesselmorris@netzero.com

JESSE L. MORRIS, CEO

JLM UNLIMITED ENTERPRISES, L.L.C.

Jesse,

As this forum is intended for receiving feedback - I will offer the following thoughts:

1. Posting in all capitals is not a good idea.

2. I would double check the grammar and spelling before posting.

3.  Do you have a definition of your "right investor"?   (If you want someone who has experience in the food service industry - then I would say so.)

4. You mention your signature menu item - does that mean you have restaurant experience? If so, you might want to mention it.

5. Have you identified an amount that you need?

I hope this helps. If you want to discuss your situation, feel free to drop me a PM or contact me directly.

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Hi Jesse,

I suggest you to first make a decision and choose a preferred type of investor. Find out all possible details about angel investors and venture capital firms and choose wisely, considering the advantages of each category. Write your business plan and the executive summary and then contact only suitable investors. By suitable I mean business partners that are more likely to go for a partnership with you. Consider stage preference, sector preference as well, amount of money they usually invest and geographical area. Contact only those investors that have experience with companies in their portfolios similar to yours, or dealing in the same business sector. If you have acquaintances that can refer you to proper investors, that is excellent. If not, you have the good option of using a list of investors that you are going to download and personalize. Good luck and hope we will hear from your excellent food business!