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Hello everyone,

Please check out my website at www.wordsmithsandmore.com. Please give me some advice on how to make it better.  I`m trying to increase/improve my SEO (search engine optimization).

Thanks, DayDreamer

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Daydreamer, I can see myself using a service like yours in the future however there were for me three turnoffs right away;

1; the front page took forever to load I have a dsl connection and if I picked you up in a link or search I would have closed the window long before it was done.

2; the writing on the right side is red, I don`t know why and refuse to apologise but red text drives me away.

3; you have a page called "payment details" if I want payment details I email you or you can walk me through it if I order, in my opinion (which is worth what your paying hehehe) leave the money stuff till the end of the sale, if you feel you must put it up then disguse it in a FAQ page. I just think it is tacky. remember it seems online everyone is trying to get your money.

just my thoughts.

sorry for being so blunt, my website needs tons of help.

Stan

http://www.startupnation.com/forums/8062/1/1

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DayDreamer,

There are several free tools you can use to began an evaluation - for example http://website.grader.com/

I agree with the tool`s assessment of your site.



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Phillip Barnhart
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