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Jan 29, 2007 8:16 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Kevin,

I`m not sure if your request for a writing quote was directed at me. I don`t freelance but I am happy to provide copywriting advice and suggestions free of charge in this forum.

1. Instead of: Welcome To Logo Consulate

[ Print Your Own Professionally Designed Business Cards In Five Minutes]

2. Instead of: This is logo consulate, the online design store, where from as little as seventy one dollars you can choose a professionally designed logo and print one hundred colour business cards. Our logo design quality would cost hundreds if not thousands our dollars elsewhere.

[ Design your stationery and business cards online. Choose from ten thousand professionally designed logos. Order your printed products online from anywhere in the world. ]

3. Create another call to action button below text.

4. A lot of the other text is unnecessary.

These are just basic suggestions. Feel free to post any additional questions.

kevinl

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Jan 29, 2007 8:23 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks your a legend !!!

Regards
Kevin


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Kevin Lindsay is a creative director who now owns and runs www.logoconsulate.com in Sydney Australia.
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