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dchelix

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Sep 07, 2012 11:18 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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I have an idea for a preventative home maintenance business. I know exactly what I want in my head, but had difficulty writing it down and wording it correctly. But nonetheless, I typed it all up on a webpage.

Could you guys read over it and tell me if it sounds ok?

http://www.essencehomecare.com/our-services.html

Thanks so much!

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