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coachjp

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Dec 25, 2006 12:58 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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A while back I had a complete flash website and plenty gave me honest feedback to get rid of the flash and so I did as I saw the downfall of a full flash website. The new site is now up. Please check out www.morphcoaching.com

Once again I ask for some honest feedback and criticism. Thank you in advance!


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Morph Coaching a breeding ground for change 239-438-8494 info@morphcoaching.com http://www.morphcoaching.com
StuartCalgary

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Dec 25, 2006 2:28 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Good Day...the only thing I would recommend is maybe some testimonials...something to want me to dig deeper.  Otherwise looks good.

Have a great day.

Stuart R. Crawford
Calgary, Alberta
http://www.calgarysmbshow.com



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Stuart R. Crawford Business Development Representative IT Matters Inc. IT Matters is the Microsoft IMPACT Award Winner in 2006 for Small Business Specialist of the Year and CEA Silver Medal for Best Small Business Solution in Canada. 412,1000 8th Ave SW Calgary, AB T2P 3M7 Canada Phone: 403.710.4357 Fax: 403.206.7317 EMail: scrawford@itmatters.ca Web: http://www.itmatters.ca
coachjp

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Dec 25, 2006 2:33 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thank you Stuart and I am in the process of working on the testimonial page, so you confirmed what I was thinking also. Thanx again!

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StuartCalgary

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Dec 25, 2006 2:46 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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No worries...tried to ping you offline...

the info address in your signature file is not working

Cheers

Stuart R. Crawford
Calgary, AB
http://www.calgarysmbshow.com



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Stuart R. Crawford Business Development Representative IT Matters Inc. IT Matters is the Microsoft IMPACT Award Winner in 2006 for Small Business Specialist of the Year and CEA Silver Medal for Best Small Business Solution in Canada. 412,1000 8th Ave SW Calgary, AB T2P 3M7 Canada Phone: 403.710.4357 Fax: 403.206.7317 EMail: scrawford@itmatters.ca Web: http://www.itmatters.ca
CraigL

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Dec 25, 2006 3:40 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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This is a way better site than previously! Excellent job! ;-D

On the home page, I`d put the bulleted list first---the "have you ever thought to." I`d then keep paragraph four as the now #2. In other words move three and four to the top, in that order.

You currently are bolding the first three words to each paragraph, but search-engine optimization (SEO) looks at bold for relevance. The bolding should be reserved for key phrases, not just for looks. You should also make sure your headings are tagged as <h1>, h2, and h3. Try to at least have one Heading1, and two Heading2 subtitles.

This problem follows the entire site, and although it`s not destructive, it`s an opportunity missed for that SEO writing. That`s the next step, to look into key phrases and see how to edit the content for optimization.

There should be an exclamation point after "YOU!" Especially if it`s going to be all caps like that.

On the Contact Us, (I`m on Firefox 1.0), the "comments` box runs off the right side of the main, white column about half an inch into the dark green right border. It looks unprofessional and shouldn`t be that difficult to quickly fix.

Other than that, the site is far more friendly and easy to use than the previous one. I think it`s definitely a better way to go. :-)
coachjp

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Dec 25, 2006 5:51 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thank you Craig and I will look into the feedback you gave. It is much appreciated.


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Morph Coaching a breeding ground for change 239-438-8494 info@morphcoaching.com http://www.morphcoaching.com
iouone2

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Dec 26, 2006 1:18 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Just to chime in. I am using FireFox 2.0 (Mac) and I don`t have the problem with the Contact Us page that CraigL described. It doesn`t mean it shouldn`t be looked into though. Maybe you have already fixed it. 

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Vincent Wilcox (a.k.a. KRAKR)
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My band: Letters Make Words
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