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Hi Mia,

    Welcome and good luck.  I`m sure SUN will be a great resource for you.

Welcome.

Ron

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Hi Mia and Hi David:

Just wanted to say howdy and welcome both of you.  Soak up some SUN!

T

Please review my following website .Any comment and suggestion would be appriciated.
Thanks
Orbitbusinessloans
http://www.orbitbusinessloans.com
 

Hi there, and welcome to the community
After reviewing your website I have a few suggestions:
A - In the front page, your background color and the text background color don`t match, it makes the site appear less professional
B - You should user better headings in your pages
C - Your purchase link (Get Started Now) is quite long, why do you need it so big?
D - You should add an About Us and Contact Us page - people like to see who they`re dealing with, and would like different options of contacting you prior to purchase
E - The front page is quite long, in fact most of your pages are... try summarizing your info.

Wish you luck

Jmes 



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I`d suggest hiring a professional Web developer and designer. I clicked the "Get Started" link, and for half a minute, thought it was blank. All the content along the left margin seemed to be a navigation system. Until I looked closely and realized it was a form of some sort. Since the text was so small, I didn`t read any of it.

You`re offering loans for no collateral, basically saying that you`re giving away something for nothing. That already has LOTS of red flags going up, with warnings and buzzers going off.

If you don`t have an exceedingly professional-looking and believable site, I think you`re going to have some trouble going forward.