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HelpWithYourEssay.com
HelpWithYourEssay.Com was created for students who could use some support in their writing process, but who don`t want to take someone else`s work and pass it off as their own.

It`s an attractive site. I like that the first three points are links, but they don`t "look like" links. They should be underlined at least. Then, when you go to step 1, "What`s an Essay?" there should be a button at the bottom that takes you to setp 2, so you don`t have to go back to the home page. Then to step 3.

Your concept seems to be like a flowchart, but in order to move through the "flow" I have to keep going back to some starting point. It`s disruptive.

Another thing that would be nic would be to have an input area at each pause point. Ask a question, and the user can input some content. The site stores it, assigns it to the right variable, and at the end of the process, outputs the completed boxes as a single essay.

Who`s your target market for this site?

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HelpWithYourEssay.com
HelpWithYourEssay.Com was created for students who could use some support in their writing process, but who don`t want to take someone else`s work and pass it off as their own.

Focus on the teachers: They have a financial incentive to use the site. Highschool students could care less about essays and would likely prefer copying and pasting plagiarized material into an essay.

What you`re basically doing is trying to bring back some form of education on the idea of "conceptualization." It`s become a lost art, although the ability to form concepts is (we think) unique to the human mind.

You might want to read Ayn Rand`s "Introduction to Objectivist Epistemology," for some useful insights into how the mind continually condenses and subsumes information. But I think if teachers are using the site to better organize their material, that`d be the way to go.