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Our products (https://www.galleriapangea.com/
horse_sculptures_musician_playing_drum_on_horseback/
product_details.html) were recently chose by a FOX TV
pilot as set decoration. I wrote a press release. Can someone help me to
edit it
better?

Also I have submitted a few PR through PRleap and PRzoom`s free
submissions. (the releases indeed became searchable through google
news) Do the paid service really worth it? What`s the difference? If I ever
want to pay for PR distribution, it should be this one.

Here is the release (Thank you for everyone`s help in advance!!)

GALLERIA PANGEA ARTWORK SELECTED FOR UPCOMING TV PILOT?


Galleria Pangea’s handmade Chinese pottery horses to decorate
upcoming Fox pilot "New Amsterdam" ?



The art department of the upcoming FOX TV show “New Amsterdam” has
recently chosen Chinese handmade pottery reproductions (North Wei
Dynasty A.D.386~A.D.534) from Galleria Pangea to serve as set
decoration. Ms. Christiansen from the art department has worked as the
set decorator for many high profile movies such as Man in Black (I&II), The
Producers, and Hitch.

The pottery reproductions were hand-created by Gao Yufei, who has been
working in the ceramics field in his native Henan Province for over 13
years. Each reproduction design is modeled from the originals that were
unearthed from his hometown. Gao uses raw material taken from the
same location as the originals to perfect the reproductions authentic look
and feel. He also works as a pottery repair expert for the Luoyang
Museum in China.   

"Our store carries a huge variety of handmade Chinese artworks for home
décor purposes," said Galleria Pangea president Jason Yeung. "As this
selection shows, our artists` work is truly exceptional in quality and can
be used in a wide range of aesthetic considerations."

Galleria Pangea is a collaborative partnership between Asian and Western
friends interested in the relationship of culture and craft. Its staff travels
extensively throughout China to discover the handmade treasures that
often lie hidden in the infrequently-visited regions of the country. Much
like Gao Yufei`s own work, each of Galleria Pangea`s products has a
unique cultural significance and story to be shared; other work by Gao
Yufei and many other talented artists like him is available through the
company website at http://www.galleriapangea.com.


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Quality Creations by Hand: Artisan Jewelry, Wooden Mask, Handmade Sculpture, Antique Reproduction, Chinese Scroll Paintings and More

http://www.GalleriaPangea.com

Hi Jason,

If you pay for a distribution over PR Newswire, BusinessWire, or PR Web, you`ll see a larger distribution across the Internet and other media venues. Also, media members tend to give a press release more credibility when it is officially distributed "across the wire."

Of course, the most important aspect is to have an interesting and unique story to tell. Do you have any important information on how and why the art department chose your art for the program?

Thanks,

Melanie

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Melanie Rembrandt
CEO, Rembrandt Communications®, LLC
Visit www.rembrandtwrites.com for valuable PR tips and SEO copywriting help!
Twitter: @RembrandtWrites

Thanks Melanie.

The set decorator found us through Google search. The reproductions we
sell are rare and top of line quality. We have found a few antique shops that
are selling the same thing as originals for over 1000 dollars. (if they were
the originals, the cost should be in 10,000 of dollars)

I am going to think of something more interesting to add. (having a hard
time though)

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Quality Creations by Hand: Artisan Jewelry, Wooden Mask, Handmade Sculpture, Antique Reproduction, Chinese Scroll Paintings and More

http://www.GalleriaPangea.com

Maybe you can add a quote from the set decorator as to why he/she chose your company and how your products will be used (and by which stars) on the program?

Melanie

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Melanie Rembrandt
CEO, Rembrandt Communications®, LLC
Visit www.rembrandtwrites.com for valuable PR tips and SEO copywriting help!
Twitter: @RembrandtWrites

Jason5Yuan,

My name is Yuan :)

I like your art, you could get more sales by posting on TradeUrban.com

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