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I like the idea, we went through one very difficult pregnancy and are in the middle of another.  My wife is on bed rest in the hospital for the last 3 months of her pregnancy.  With no family around, I`m left to juggle work, Mr. Mom duties with a 2-year old and daily trips to the hospital for us.

I would like to see this quote from your copy more prominently displayed so I know exactly what you do right off the bat.

Pregnant R Us offers its clients the highest level of professional and personalized services during your pregnancy.

Oh, yeah a little creepy parallelism here, but my wife`s name is Donna!

Search on ZekeLL ( think that`s his handle).  He has had some pretty good SEO tips that I`ve employed with success at my site.

One final marketing piece of advice.  You might want to target Fertility Doctors.  I stand as the exception to this rule, but most of the people going through this have a decent amount of money and could better afford your services.

Hi Donna, welcome to the community :-)
It`s a great idea, particularly the ancillary services and ideas. I do have one question; will you encounter any problems from Toys `R` Us relative to their trademark?

As to the Web site, the main issue I have is contrast. You have some nice pastel colors, and the overall feel of the site is nice and soothing. The problem is that the text color itself is also pastel, making it difficult to read. :-) Why make another difficulty for people already having problems?

I suspect the solution would be simple enough: Just change the font color globally to plain black.

You could darken the titles for your tabs to navy blue, and that`d make it easier to read as well.

Something you could also add would be to make your various services links. For example, "Doctor Visit Companions." If that were linked to a page the explains and talks about why someone would want this, how great it would be, and the functional benefits, you`d gain two things:

• You`d have another page where you would have lots of SEO opportunities, along with graphics, and
• You`d have an opportunity to focus your sales pitch on exactly that single thing.

Not everyone will want all your service. But if you can hook someone one even 1 of your services, the likelihood that they`ll come back for more increases exponentially.

The menu-navigation bar to the left of the services page only takes me to that page. By making live links for each service, you continue the customer journey and move them around your site, see?

Another simple thing to do would be to make your banner link back to your home page. It`s a fast, simple way to help folks always get back to the starting point. :-)

All in all, it`s definitely a strong business idea. I`m thinking of things like Caregivers or what`s that one, Visiting Angels? You likely could model after them, and see how they`re getting the word out there.

Wonderful!! Great feedbacks ....I am not sure if R Us will be a problem. I guess I may need to do some research there.

Thanks-a-million,

Donna

www.pregnant-r-us.com

 

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE

 

Sunrise , Florida -  A group of experienced mothers in south Florida have created Pregnant R Us, a support service company for soon-to-be moms.

 

With services ranging from doctor visit companions to Lamaze and workout partners, Pregnant R Us provides much needed support and advocacy to women juggling careers, family, and the stresses of pregnancy.

 

“Every pregnant woman deserves a personal assistant,” remarked founder Donna Huie-Gordon. “No need to feel pretentious, you have questions, needs, and wants.  We’re here to help!”

 

Huie-Gordon got the idea for this service from her recent pregnancy.  Fatigue and emotions inspired her to reach out to other pregnant women who were experiencing the same frustrations.

 

“We would share stories and exchange frustrations about not knowing what to wear, where to go shopping, what to buy, groceries, and keeping appointments.  Things are so much smoother and more enjoyable with the support of someone who’s been there.” said Huie-Gordon.

 

Expectant mothers seeking VIP treatment are encouraged to visit the website www.pregnant-r-us.com or call 954 533 0382.  A stellar Personal Pregnancy Assistant will be assigned to her through-out the entire pregnancy.

 

Looks okay to me, although I`m not a press release expert. I see a few places of inconvenient language, but other than that, it lays out the news, what`s what, and all the important stuff. Couple of basic typos you could modify:

hello, i am a new user of this site.i found that this site is very interesting and like of my type.
i am getting new knowledge from this site.
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neetu
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Car Loans

Hi Neetu, welcome to the community. :-)