Hi there :-)
I looked at "notarybusiness.net," and that site needs a lot of work on
the writing. Frankly, it`s horrible. Then I stepped over to the Bush
Financial site, and saw that the writing was equally horrible.
At least in the Bush site you have a call to action, capture potential
client information, and then go from there with whatever it is you
offer. But the notary business is far too confused and quickly takes
someone off to mysterious other sites.
On a quick look, I`d hire a copywriter to revise both sites` content.
Beyond that, I won`t get into the code and underlying issues.