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Hi, all. Thanks again to the couple of people who commented on my site. Exciting news -- I've got a web design team that have taken on the challenge of giving me an exciting site that will draw people in. However, now my task becomes the wording on the site. Can you please tell me in useful ways whether what I'm saying is valuable: what do I need to do to get people coming back and signing up for my business services. Please keep in mind that this is a small midwest farming community and not New York City.

Thanks, in advance.

Nancy

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Nancy Becher we help small biz connect/collaborate/SUCCEED www.success4biz.biz certified mastermind facilitator business mentor entrepreneurial consultant

Your website sells sort of like virtual office services, so phrases I can think of:

 

schedule meetings in a beutiful office wihtout he bruden of owning one, the hourly office space

Get a fancy mailing address without having to pay a rent

 

Think of reason of why would somebody benefit from your services, and phrase those in short catchy ways. Perhaps even include a picture that illustrates the concept

Bests

 

 

 

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