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Yes, the page was interesting enough to look further because it`s an idea that I hadn`t seen before.

A minor spelling issue in your FAQs, "Wholesale" is one word.

You are not completely correct about the meaning of "Patent Pending", and I don`t see the need to slap the viewer in the face with it.  I don`t know what you are more proud of, your product or that you`ve applied for a patent.  A simple notice at the bottom of the home page is all that you need to defend your idea.  I don`t see what it adds to your product for the purposes of individual sales.

The prices seem quite high.  You need an `about us` page to explain why.  Is there something special to the starting stock that adds to the value?  Other than the message cutout, what is so special about these FF`s?

You really do need to accommodate the individuals who want their own message.


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MannMade Digital Video
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Thank you Steve.  I have made the changes you suggested with the exception of the about us page.  I will have to do that later.

Yup, on both counts: It sells and explains the idea, and has me wanting to click for more. (The photos could be brighter, but they work fine for now.) :-)

Cool idea.  One comment.  At the bottom, you say "New products" and they are already on sale.  That doesn`t make any sense to me.  Why would you discount new products?  That sends a very negative marketing message.  Drop that and have a "Bargain Cave" for items you need to have on sale and don`t call them new, even if they are.

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Nice ... love the product.

I think you should have it how you have it ... explain the product.
But it could use a bit more zip and simplicity.

Like 2 pics, side by side but overlayed ... one has a big 1 on it, the other a big 2 ... 1st says "Wear your Tanz" 2nd says "Enjoy your tan!"
Or something like that.

Less words. More fun/easy appeal. A big star thing that says "Variety of Designs!" or "Over 100 Design to Choose from!"

These pages are a bit annoying but look at the easy and exciting way in which they display the products:
http://www.asseenontv.com/prod-pages/aqu_glbs_ontv.html
http://www.bendaroos.com/