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fixx

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Mar 25, 2008 11:50 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hello fellow SUN-treprenuers

I just created a new online startup and its been launched recently. Somehow I`m a bit in a conundrum as how to effectively market out the products.

SEO-wise its quite healthy - I got an at least top 1-10 pages depending on the search criterias. So I`m pretty much happy with the search engine optimization.

I`m pretty new to this online business as I currently have an IT consultancy business which is totally of a different playing field.

Any points to take away gracious people? or constructive criticism to the site perhaps?


ps: fyi, (GoWebGuru.com)
 
fixx3/25/2008 1:12 PM
studiocherie

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Mar 26, 2008 11:02 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Your web site looks great.  I like the testimonials.  Having someone in the US do a testimonial for you might be good, unless we are not your big market.  I like that one has a photo, more of those would be good.
 
My only challenge is your tag line.  I think grammar is important.  Shouldn`t it say, "Fewer words, richer content?"  Maybe you mean smaller or more humble words, but I don`t think so, yet that is what you are saying by choosing "lesser."  Also "contents" plural would indicate a list of ingredients, making the adjective "richer" relatively meaningless.  Whereas, "content" singular would connote the whole and validate your use of your chosen adjective.
 
Sorry to be picky.  Some of the best advice I have received here has been the pickiest.


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fixx

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Mar 26, 2008 12:50 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi studiocherie

Thank you for the compliment. Somehow the grammar part is a bit embarrassing though.. i guess that is the part which i missed vetting thru.. gosh.. actually i wanted to use the tag line as a whole expression in generic, i guess it isn`t appropriate the way how i intended to use it..

I hope once the orders pick up, I`ll be able to add more testimonials with photos hopefully.. and yes, the US is a pretty big market - I wouldn`t want to miss getting some good customers there.

Nevertheless thanks..really appreciate the input.. I know my site is lacking some stuff and I guess  grammar is one of it. Definitely seems like i have to re-do the tag line.. well here goes the paperworks again..

Actually I was concerned about the marketing, but grammar deserves the equal attention as well.. Thank u v much!



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