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Hey Greg!  Monopoly huh?? Good one!!!  Thanks so much for the the suggestion!  I will totally keep you posted.  Right this very second I am having an email "conversation" with my sourcing agent about the manufacturing and there`s a small bump in the road, but such is the life of an inventor huh?  I am still scheduled for a summer release of collections 1 and 2 so I`ll keep you posted!

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Leslie
Founder and President
Charmed Life Products LLC
Grill Charms™… The MUST HAVE grilling accessory that is revolutionizing the American Cook-out AND The perfect gift for any occasion!
Grill Charms
                                                                                                    

I think this is a wonderful idea for people with food allergies.   You might want to market this to people with celiac disease and families with autistic children.  Some places to start would be www.celiac.com and www.foodallergy.org.   Also you need to change groomsman to groomsmen and on your shop online page change forth to fourth.

 

Suzanne

www.elegantwritings.com

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Suzanne Elegant Writings Enterprises

Thank you Suzanne!  Great ideas!  (and thanks for the spelling correction, I`m horrible at that kind of stuff!)

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Leslie
Founder and President
Charmed Life Products LLC
Grill Charms™… The MUST HAVE grilling accessory that is revolutionizing the American Cook-out AND The perfect gift for any occasion!
Grill Charms
                                                                                                    

Wow Grill, what a very cool concept for a product!

 

As a copywriter, I can tell you that it needs help in a few areas, namely punctuation and grammar. I`d give a critique but this is what I do for a living--write websites and such. If you need help, I can give you a low-cost deal.

 

Best,

Kristen Fischer

http://www.kristenfischer.com

Does creativelyse mean "creative + analyse" or "creative + lyse" where "lyse" = cell destruction? Just curious.

I thought at first it was "creative" and "Elyse" but her name is Kristen, not Elyse.  So I was wondering as well.

I sort of thought it might mean "creative destruction". If so, it`s a very clever play on words for us Latin freaks.

Wow, you two are finny.......and mercyless.  Keap up the goood work.  I woodnt waunt to be piced on buy yous 2 so ill do my beast.  Now, wears that spell chicker.

Greg