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DesignIdeas

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Oct 09, 2006 9:00 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Hi! I know this forum is for inventions ... but I was wondering... if you`d be interested in giving me a design prototype critique on my ALL New! Direct Mail Postcards.

They are not typical!

They are mini-newsletters postcards. What I like to call "Mini-Magazine" Postcards. They are listed in my profile but I will put the links here for you to easily click on...

Design Ideas Mini-Magazine Postcard 8.5" x 5.5"

Mortgage Company Mini-Magazine Postcard 4.25" x 6"

Love to hear your good SuN feedback!

Thanks,

Tony Russ

Design Ideas Marketing Associates

P.s.: I have listed in "Critique" section as well not sure if either is correct forum.

CraigL

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Oct 10, 2006 12:18 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Awesome! What`s it cost?

DesignIdeas

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Oct 10, 2006 8:26 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Thanks CraigL!

Lots more info in my profile. Exclusive StartUp Nation Discounts!

Tony Russ
Design Ideas Marketing Associates
www.designideas.tv

CraigL

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Oct 12, 2006 1:01 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Your link should be here instead, in my opinion. :-)
One problem, on all the pages. When I click the "About" button, it brings up my email client. Check that it isn`t set with a "mailto:" tag.

:-)
craig

DesignIdeas

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Oct 12, 2006 6:48 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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CraigL:

Thanks for taking the time to review my site. I have made the changes that you spoke about.

Have a Great Day!

Tony Russ

Design Ideas Marketing Associates

www.designideas.tv

CraigL

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Oct 12, 2006 7:57 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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One other suggestion: You should make your logo a hot link on every page you send someone to. I should be able to click your logo, which is very nice by the way, and return to your home page.

I`d still like to see the pricing structure much more evident, and less confusion between the specific product and the clients. It`s my understanding that you produce mini-newsletters. But for me to have to confirm that through this forum means many other customers won`t know for sure. That should be a certainty, not an implication. ;-)

I think it`s the name of the tab, "Design." Maybe it would better be called "Products." Then, where you have each very large, blue and bold category type, each of those should be a live link to a page devoted to some content. So "Logos" would link to a page all about logos and what you offer, with some examples. (It`s the SEO writer in me coming out!)

CraigL

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Nov 14, 2006 2:08 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Little doubt in my mind that SEO works. The trick is finding someone who`s also skilled at "search engine marketing" (SEM). They`ll work out the right key phrases, as that`s what gets written into the SEO content.

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