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Does my website work?

how can i bring advertisers to it?

what method of advertising is my site best suited for?

any help will be great!

WWW.GOPURENOW.COM

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- Andrew
AndrewHazen.com
PrimeVisibility.com
InternetIdeas.net

Thanks for the feedback, greatly appreciated.

I need to tell you that I am a brand new amateur when it comes to advertising on the internet. Yes i did make some money when i was in grade 9 going to the computer rooms and clicking on every link on my geocities website... remember those? lol

so this is my first attempt at a website, i just took a CSS template and tweaked it.

i will going to business to business and my goal is to build a business directory that are looking for joint ventures but most importantly SEO for their website.

what i want to know does the website read well and is it understandable what i am wanting to do with it?

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"I need to tell you that I am a brand new amateur when it comes to advertising on the internet. Yes i did make some money when i was in grade 9 going to the computer rooms and clicking on every link on my geocities website... remember those? lol"

I trust that you`ve grown up since then.  You just described `click fraud` which the ad networks do not appreciate, and they will prosecute.


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Steve Mann
Internet Videographer
MannMade Digital Video
My Email

To me the name "PUR Industries" sounds like you are a manufacturer of something .... it doesn`t give the feeling of being a business connection or strategy type of service .... even though you say that in the tag line under the business name, the first impression of the name throws me off.

Page text needs to be darker, to me anyway, it`s just too light with a white background.

The first 3 paragraphs almost feel to me like a get-rich-quick sales pitch .... maybe try rewording it in bold or H tags ....

Creating winning opportunities is the single most important thing that you can do right now to leverage your business and to utilize your power to create more profits





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M Hall
Website Critique Community
International Society of Curmudgeons

Thank you all for you feedback,

and to Videography post, yes i am well out of highschool by now, so no worries about the feds here lol.

I`m not really selling anything here on the site,.... just yet.

I am going business to business (door to door) to promote my services and to promote my client 1800getleads services.

So right now i am just using the site as a information tool to showcase (in my binder that i go out with) what it is that i do, and ask the company if they want to be part of it.

To vwebworld - i havent done any SEO marketing, so i dont have any target keywords just yet.