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jaymill

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Aug 26, 2008 11:21 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Just started the website and I`m new to this I used to sell my goods by word of mouth. Any help will be appreciated in Critqueing, sales and getting merchandise into stores. Can use your help to become successful.

Thanks, jaymill www.2wothepoint.com

Videography

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Aug 26, 2008 12:20 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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I hate to sound like an old fart, but I simply don`t get it. Is yours a logo that I should recognize or are you trying to establish a brand like Hollister clothes?

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charlie702

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Aug 26, 2008 4:00 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Auto-loading music is not good. I would just get rid of it entirely. Or at least have a well placed mute button.

Not a bad start though. Always keep improving it. :)

Webline

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Aug 26, 2008 5:04 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Ummm ... why make people wait until they get to Paypal before they see the prices? That alone is a bad sign. Where are your shipping/return policies?

And it looks like people can only buy one item at a time, since there`s no obvious shopping cart.

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jaymill

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Aug 26, 2008 6:00 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Yes, I`m trying to establish a brand like Hollister, PhatFarm, AF.

jaymill

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Aug 26, 2008 6:02 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Thanks, I`ll look into that, I`m just starting so alot I`m learning along the way.

jaymill

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Aug 26, 2008 6:05 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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I`ll see about making changes for the pricing did`nt think about that and I`ll get a shopping cart. I`m just starting and alot I`m doing by myself. I`m glad for the suggestions if any others Please let me know. Thanks

guerrillaRed

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Aug 27, 2008 11:04 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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I`d suggest using someting like homestead storefront at this stage, much easier to work with.

Site looks very amateur honestly. Good luck with it, feel free to send me an e-mail if you need any help finding a shopping cart solution.

envymike

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Aug 30, 2008 4:35 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Jay, You can just change the paypal buy now buttons to add to cart buttons. I mean its still going to take you to the paypal site for the payment the same way it is now, unless you get a payment gateway or ecommerce plan.

kathleenfasanella

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Sep 05, 2008 1:10 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Get rid of the tunes or provide an on/off button.

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