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Mar 09, 2013 8:51 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi all, I've got some headline ideas going on here for these two apps I'm working on. Need your advice. How do I make these better:

List of headlines for two services:

EasyMango ... http://easybuckets.skakunmedia.com

  • Track your projects in stages so you and your team are always on the same page.
  • Easily organise and track the stages of your projects from start to finish.
  • Tag and organise your projects. Track the stages of completion so you're always on track.
  • Stay on track and in control. Organise your projects from start to finish.
  • Never loose control of your projects again. Stay organised and track your progress.



http://Moveelo.com

  • Easily create a desktop, mobile & tablet-friendly website.
  • Easily create a desktop, mobile & tablet-friendly website for your small business.
  • Mobile, tablet and desktop-friendly websites for your small business.
  • Get a desktop, mobile & tablet-friendly website.


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