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I have been developing this site on my own for 2 months now using Microsoft Office Live Small Business.

Some of you already know that I take longer than "normal" to complete some things because of chronic illness. This is not an excuse for poor or sloppy work, I just want everyone to understand why it takes me so long sometimes.

So hammer away, what is wrong with my content layout, ad placement, homepage's "grab attention" ability and About Us page believability.

I have no particular market targeted as of yet.

http://mentalblockstosuccess.com

Thanks for the input everyone.

Hello, I am not to good at this but will give you my opinion

Site is simple and easy to read.

I did notice a few things:

On the New Life page I see in the top right corner a google ad. It kind of sticks out and to me maybe change it to the other style of ad that is located on that same page or remove it.  (same thing on the About Us page at the bottom left)

Contact Us page. maybe use a smaller form style. The phone number is a bit spaced out, maybe try 1-(403)-942-2245.

Site map. maybe alphabetize everything?

Maybe add a graphic on the top where it says ''mental blocks to success...''

Thats all I could think of for now, sorry if its a bit plain.. 

mjr711 - Thank you for your input!

I'm not sure what you mean about the Header graphic, the black head picture is in the header.

I will definitely check out the other points you mentioned. I am having the "usual" problems; getting everything to be consistent from one browser/screen resolution to another.

Have a great day everyone!