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shayla2004

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Apr 22, 2008 9:37 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi, all!

I wanted to share with you a recent press release I wrote. It shows the before and after:  http://iambuzzworthy.com/2008/04/23/beforeafter-example/

Thanks,
Shayla



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shayla2004

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TapeSeal

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Apr 24, 2008 7:32 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Shayla, just noticed your post.  I thought I`d drop a line since it is a press release about Tape-Seal.  I have to say that I was personally impressed w/ Shayla.  She is more than prompt and John and I were very satisfied!

Good luck!



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Tape-Seal by Greystone Design, Inc.
Tape-Seal Stops Paint Bleed
602-677-1930 office
602-434-7182 Tammy`s mobile
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shayla2004

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May 12, 2008 7:20 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks so much, Tammy!

Shayla



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S. Price
info@iambuzzworthy.com
http://iambuzzworthy.com
Every Business Deserves Attention!
shayla2004

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May 12, 2008 7:23 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Between May 12, 2008 to May 23, 2008, SuN members, who mention this post, can receive a re-written press release for $65.00. A summer special for all SuN members!


Thanks,
Shayla



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S. Price
info@iambuzzworthy.com
http://iambuzzworthy.com
Every Business Deserves Attention!
shayla2004

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May 12, 2008 7:23 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Between May 12, 2008 to May 23, 2008, SuN members, who mention this post, can receive a re-written press release for $65.00. A summer special for all SuN members!

Also, take advantage of our unlimited marketing consulting service. Receive all the marketing consulting you need via email for two weeks for only $150. (Approx. $10.70 a day, compared to $25/hour fees.)


Thanks,
Shayla

shayla20045/19/2008 10:01 AM


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TapeSeal

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May 12, 2008 8:45 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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You`re welcome Shayla.  I just wanted to give some 3rd party feedback on the press release.  We got calls from some major publications as a result of sending out the release to pre registered press at the National Hardware Show.  One publication, in particular, raved about how great the press release was because it was so well written and informative including all of the key information.  We did change a couple of minor things (i.e. added some images we didn`t have at the time of your rewrite).  If what people tell me are true, we should be included in some major publications as a result.  Once I get confirmation I`ll include links if I can!

Thanks....Tammy, President and co-inventor of Tape-Seal



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Tammy Richardson, President
Tape-Seal by Greystone Design, Inc.
Tape-Seal Stops Paint Bleed
602-677-1930 office
602-434-7182 Tammy`s mobile
jprichardson@cox.net or
TRichardson73@cox.net
http://www.PerfectPaintLines.com
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