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Jul 10, 2007 1:26 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I have nothing to buy - nothing to sell on my website - strictly a brochure website. All comments are welcome. www.cool-associates.com Best regards. Joe the Road Warrior



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Joe the Road Warrior Cool & Associates, Inc. where Quality is NEVER an Accident www.cool-associates.com
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Jul 10, 2007 5:03 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I think you`re always "selling" something ... even if it`s just selling yourself!

I think that you just start out listing stuff ... and that is a little confusing. I would like to know a bit more about you and your benefits, in plain English. You seem like you have a lot of specialized knowledge .... but that doesn`t come across when you just start listing things at the top without any kind of intro paragraph. So go back, write that paragraph, and sell me on YOU!
nhgnikole2007-7-10 17:4:19
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