This is all unbelievably helpful for the most novice all the way to experts in business. Thank you all for the excellent advice and helpful hints. All that gooshy stuff said, I have a start up company I am trying to fund and launch, so this thread is especially helpful since I am getting ready to approach possible investors for capital. My company is web-based and connects quality pre-screened tenants with equally qualified landlords. What I have been telling people is to imagine careerbuilder.com, but for landlords (taking the place of employers) and tenants (taking the place of the prospective employee on the job hunt).
My elevator pitch:
Individually empowering, financially sound real estate solutions managed by you.
What do you think? Is it too fluffy with not enough defining content or am I on the right track? Thanks so much for your valuable feedback in advance!
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