Hello, It`s me once again.
Just so none of you who had critiqued my first attempt at this thought their advice was falling on deaf ears, here is proof that you can teach an old dog a new trick.
I thought i`d ask for a new critique of the changes I made.
Here is the before link... I really thought this was pretty good...
here is what the new revisions look like. (I know it still needs "some" work like a much better header and a slide show viewer instead of so many pics but i`m working on that...
I`ve cut out most of the copy i thought was good and replaced it with just the facts... so, it doesn`t show much personality nor, does it sound very appealing to me but...? what do i know?
also, I have this earmarked to be hosted on a different site with its own domain but am having a hell of a time with getting it loaded but, it will be on it`s own thing when i can find another bucket full of patience..
Anyway, Your thoughts, suggestions, or comments are appreciated:) Is this new version an improvement or has standarizing it sucked the life and personality out of it?