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Interesting concept. From just looking at the home page, I`d recommend capitalizing the M (BeerBongme --> BeerBongMe) in your header.

Also I think you should restructure the order of your products on the left column. Put your key products, namely beer related items at the top, seems a little weird with "airsoft guns" at the top slot.

But the "about me" paragraph higher up. I think it would work better if you put that paragraph above the "new arrivals," I would`ve never seen it if I hadn`t scrolled down.

Need to spend some time on copywriting, and styling the text a bit....lots of misspellings and bad grammar, could use more keywords and internal linking in the text, and there`s more fonts and colors you can throw a stick at! (i.e. too many for my taste).  Would be good also for more information about the company - seems like just the sort of business that would have some pretty good stories and background to share.

Ok, first of all where were you when I was in college? The head rush bottle beer bong would have been the tool of choice when I was in college... But we had to resort to KEG Stands and a beer funnel...
It`s funny how the products keep getting better and better. I remember I bought a 34 buck breathalyzer that I would use all the time on people before they left my house. If the beathalyzer chirped, it meant you were crashing out on the futon "NO Exception" unless mom came and got you or you called the MADD hot line... Do they still send someone to pick you up? Its a free service that it`s offered to intoxicated drivers... better than getting on the road and killing someone...
But anyways, back to the subject... It needs a little cleaning up to do. I want to say that by the looks its zen cart? but I pinged your admin... over at http://www.beerbongme.com/admin/ and a winbox poped up so Im going to say that it`s Os Commerce...

Just clean up the fonts and you should be Alright... BTW... COOL PRODUCTS



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Edgar Monroy
Web Developer / Owner / Consultant
When starting your own business the need to "know-how" is greater than money!
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